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demonspawn The spamming demon from hell
Posts : 1465 Join date : 2010-10-04 Age : 32 Location : In your basement eating your cookies :D
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Mon Feb 21, 2011 4:06 pm | |
| - Smooper wrote:
- well here is the first I can do the second one later
This is just redrawn going to filter it now, but it didn't really seem like it needed it to much
Levels not changed no denoise http://eih.bz/s0/cleanejdj.jpg
Levels changes plus denoise
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looks very good, I'll wait until the second page is done though, and sorry about the wait. |
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Smooper well, at least it's better than meh
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-02-19
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Mon Feb 21, 2011 7:42 pm | |
| this one looks like crap compared to the other one also I didn't remove the sfx from the top as 1) way to much work to redraw the action line an the gradient 2) that panel would then be empty, and if you were going to add text over you can always add a gradient. also i started on it but its not even worth me trying at this point, it looked horrible |
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demonspawn The spamming demon from hell
Posts : 1465 Join date : 2010-10-04 Age : 32 Location : In your basement eating your cookies :D
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Mon Feb 21, 2011 7:49 pm | |
| lol the reason it doesn't look as good is because the pages are too close together for this one, if you space them out a little more it should look better. |
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Tran Linh Trollin' the forums since 1981
Posts : 4109 Join date : 2010-09-25 Age : 36 Location : in a maid cafe in Akiba? or behind you? who knows :O
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:18 pm | |
| hi there Smooper, I'm a translator here, good luck to the test, look forward to working with you |
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Smooper well, at least it's better than meh
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-02-19
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:35 pm | |
| do you want me to redo it for the test?
a double page is maybe at most once per chapter? And I'd rather work on another raw as I don't know if it was the drawing itself or the scanner that added all the horrendous randomly placed artifacts |
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rue u know? Spam is a crime...
Posts : 2229 Join date : 2011-01-30 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:54 pm | |
| Top right of the GTO1404156 (one where he's pouring the fluid). The white lights you redrew are part of the art, like demon said the pages are too close together so to fix it you'd have to probably redo it.
I'm not telling you to do anything, lol just pointing stuff out. I'll keep my nose out of this since it's demons call.
Once again, good luck hope you can work something out. |
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uuuhhh Minions Unite!
Posts : 692 Join date : 2010-12-06 Age : 29 Location : Who knows?...Probably everywhere?
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Tue Feb 22, 2011 3:13 am | |
| Hmmm... like demon and rue said space the pages out more I would give you another test but I need demon's permission first and also he can only give u member (so even if I approve u have to wait for him to approve and appoint as member)
Demon, if u do let me take over, the test Im going to give is one of my old chps of kamen teacher hes still going to redraw the sfx and also basic cleaning (lvling, burning, denoise, etc.) |
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demonspawn The spamming demon from hell
Posts : 1465 Join date : 2010-10-04 Age : 32 Location : In your basement eating your cookies :D
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Tue Feb 22, 2011 4:16 am | |
| sure go ahead uuuhhh
We can both take a look at it after (s)he's done |
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uuuhhh Minions Unite!
Posts : 692 Join date : 2010-12-06 Age : 29 Location : Who knows?...Probably everywhere?
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Tue Feb 22, 2011 4:50 am | |
| Okay... if u want an alternative test try this... otherwise u can redo the double gto page - Spoiler:
do all the basic cleaning (lvling, denoise, cleaning the text in bubbles, rotating in this case too) then redraw the sfx (redraw the japanese symbols) yes it is possible I did it myself so u can too |
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Smooper well, at least it's better than meh
Posts : 13 Join date : 2011-02-19
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:04 pm | |
| sorry I'll have to hold off on the rest of the test and cleaning, as I'm now leading two projects at work and wont have near enough time to be useful |
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uuuhhh Minions Unite!
Posts : 692 Join date : 2010-12-06 Age : 29 Location : Who knows?...Probably everywhere?
| Subject: Re: Applying as cleaner / tips Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:34 pm | |
| Okay that's fine just posts the results whenever your finished |
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