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PostSubject: Applying as cleaner   Sun Feb 27, 2011 10:10 am

So I heard you need cleaners ^^ I'd really like to help,so...Test me XD Hopefully I can help you Smile I have been a cleaner for 1 year and 6 months now cherry
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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:17 pm

hey there ekkaterinna
i'm Dreams typesetter but if hell breaks loose i'm a cleaner
anyhow i can tell your interested into LSL =p
anyhow i was reading your other intro post, you can be my partner in crime for Chibi =)
that manga takes quite the time to clean and uuuhhh has his fair share to do

anyhow heres the test

http://www.mediafire.com/?yupslm65xscfz7r

you just need to redraw the pages together, clean all the bubbles, and sfx (if there is any)

other than that goodluck,

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:53 pm

Do I need to separate the pages? I see in one of the picture in the right side there is a bit of another page Smile So I need to put the parts together?
Edit: There is a "?" .DO I need to erase that too?
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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Sun Feb 27, 2011 4:01 pm

if the bubble only has ? or .... or ! you usually don't need to take them out

and i sent you pages 140, 141, 156 and 157 right?
they are actually spreads so you need to put pages 140 and 141 together and redraw the center. same with 156 and 157. you need to re-draw the center of the page

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:21 pm

Oh another member if our LSL team....
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*keeps adding more people to my drawings now* ....Urk.. xD
Anyway good luck Very Happy.

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:28 pm

ohhh our family is growing!!! Very Happy
good luck on your test! and welcome welcome!!

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:58 pm

Good luck with the test!
If you've been a cleaner for that long, then you'll be a huge help! EXPERIENCE POWER!

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Sun Feb 27, 2011 9:15 pm

i feel out of the loop from biscuit and haruhi.... how come my Mao-chan doesn't have such a big family and the twins do? =(

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Sun Feb 27, 2011 11:17 pm

Cuz 2>1.
+ I'm too lazy to go try cleaning Shoujo.

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:08 am

Dreams u forgot to include me Sad
and gl on the test
I originally was a raw provider for lsl but the raws came so late lol
I ended up as a cleaner instead Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:15 am

oh right Uuuhhh is a part of my family xD
but we still feel left out =(

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:23 am

D'aaw, *draws you guys in* You are going to kill me when the final product is going to be done xD...

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:16 am

Hey,do I need to clean every sfx? XD I know there are groups that let the sfx,so that's why I ask XD
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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:18 am

well for the test Demon wants everything cleaned
so that includes the sfx =p

but after you pass if it's just ? , ... or ! in a bubble leave them

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:21 am

For the test, yes. You will probably not need to for a manga you may participate in but if you have too it's better to be able to than not able to, is it not?

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:02 pm

Ehm,I did what I could T_T I'm still not good with patterns and screentones DX Anyway,here it is XD
http://www.mediafire.com/?cx98w28xdpttdr7
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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:42 pm

Ah, just a note. You need to join the split pages together.
Well, wait for demon's feedback. I'll keep my mouth shut. I get bitchy when I pull all nighters.

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 2:53 pm

lol rue lack of sleep sometimes gets to him =p

anyhow i don't mind what you did here but here some feed back

you redraws sections are too close if you just move them apart a bit more it would look better
example
page 2 if you look at the top left
the bars aren't lined up

page 4 the head isn't really the right shape
it's only because you have them too close together.

so what you need to do is re-do this and have the pages a bit more further apart.
and for page 2 it's a crossbar so it's like |/|. so yeah try fixing that

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 3:06 pm

I'd say if she's going to redo it. Then she may as well try joining the pages together. It's a lot simpler than what she's trying to do.

AS for redrawing the guy's shoulder on page 2. I suggest you try using the pen tool to basically map out the shape then stroke it with a 1-2px brush. This way you can go back and adjust your pen-path if you don't like the shape.

+ As dreams said, move the pages farther apart. You've squished them together so you have no space to work in.
make the canvas bigger than what you need, that way you'll have room to play around. You can always crop off the excess after.

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PostSubject: Re: Applying as cleaner   Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:36 pm

Indeed keeping the spread together would be nice.
I think you are too fixed on using the blur tool and trying to bend it all together. It will fool small bits of images but this is from top to bottom, and readers will be able to tell, since when uploading to Mangafox it it takes up about 3/4of a 1300x900 screen

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